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Please Dont Copy. (: Remember? When she was just a little girl When her Mommy and Daddy were her whole wide world When she was so sweet & innocent & never did wrong When she would ask her parents to sing her a lullaby song When she would fall down a get a boo-boo When she would always tell you she loves you When she would play with her dollies & toys & She had the cutest little crushes on boys But now she’s wiser and older Now she doesn’t talk to her parents only her friends No more crying on daddy’s shoulder This is where her relationship with her parents ends Now drinking & smoking is what made her joy & She had her eyes on this special boy They're together now & it’s been a long time But 1 day he did such a horrible crime He broke her heart He just tore it apart Now she’s sitting alone so sad on her bed Wishing she was dead She had a knife in her fist She was slitting her wrist Time passed by & She had met a new guy She thought she was in love She gave him all her dignity & pride & They used no glove He said he loved her but he just lied She found out there was a little one It was his son But when she told him he just denied Her tummy grew But her parents had no clue Again in her room all scared & alone Thinking how could she raise a baby on her own Crying her eyes out She just had so much doubt She prayed to the lord She asked for this prayer to not be ignored She confessed & She asked to be blessed After she heard her parents come home She grabbed her knife quick & slit her throat Her parents came and saw her dead She had left a note & It said "Mommy and Daddy I’m sorry for what I’ve done I love you guys, But my depression has won" Its been a year It was her parents anniversary & They celebrated with some beer Driving & drunk down a dark street Her mom threw up all over the seat Her dad falling asleep & He heard a big beep There was a big smash & A big white flash Her mom wakes up in a hospital bed The nurse right next to her said "Ma'am your husband is dead" She turned & pulled the plug All their graves were buried next to each other’s They're now heaven happily together She turned to her parents & said "Mommy... Daddy... you guys are my whole wide world" Remember? When she was just a little girl |
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I am so sorry,please except my prayers!
My wife and I are presently in this same basic situation,we pray,& pray & pray. I would appreciate a copy of this poem! |
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