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Old 01-14-2010, 08:08 PM
JenneeEsmeralda JenneeEsmeralda is offline
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Default When She Was Just A Little Girl

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Remember? When she was just a little girl
When her Mommy and Daddy were her whole wide world
When she was so sweet & innocent & never did wrong
When she would ask her parents to sing her a lullaby song
When she would fall down a get a boo-boo
When she would always tell you she loves you
When she would play with her dollies & toys
& She had the cutest little crushes on boys

But now she’s wiser and older
Now she doesn’t talk to her parents only her friends
No more crying on daddy’s shoulder
This is where her relationship with her parents ends
Now drinking & smoking is what made her joy
& She had her eyes on this special boy
They're together now & it’s been a long time

But 1 day he did such a horrible crime
He broke her heart
He just tore it apart
Now she’s sitting alone so sad on her bed
Wishing she was dead
She had a knife in her fist
She was slitting her wrist

Time passed by
& She had met a new guy
She thought she was in love
She gave him all her dignity & pride
& They used no glove
He said he loved her but he just lied
She found out there was a little one
It was his son

But when she told him he just denied
Her tummy grew
But her parents had no clue
Again in her room all scared & alone
Thinking how could she raise a baby on her own
Crying her eyes out
She just had so much doubt
She prayed to the lord
She asked for this prayer to not be ignored
She confessed
& She asked to be blessed

After she heard her parents come home
She grabbed her knife quick & slit her throat
Her parents came and saw her dead
She had left a note
& It said
"Mommy and Daddy I’m sorry for what I’ve done
I love you guys, But my depression has won"

Its been a year
It was her parents anniversary
& They celebrated with some beer
Driving & drunk down a dark street
Her mom threw up all over the seat
Her dad falling asleep
& He heard a big beep
There was a big smash
& A big white flash

Her mom wakes up in a hospital bed
The nurse right next to her said
"Ma'am your husband is dead"
She turned & pulled the plug
All their graves were buried next to each other’s
They're now heaven happily together
She turned to her parents & said
"Mommy... Daddy... you guys are my whole wide world"
Remember? When she was just a little girl
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Old 01-15-2010, 09:20 AM
Myview2 Myview2 is offline
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I am so sorry,please except my prayers!
My wife and I are presently in this same basic situation,we pray,& pray & pray.

I would appreciate a copy of this poem!
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Old 01-15-2010, 03:14 PM
JenneeEsmeralda JenneeEsmeralda is offline
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Originally Posted by Myview2
I am so sorry,please except my prayers!
My wife and I are presently in this same basic situation,we pray,& pray & pray.

I would appreciate a copy of this poem!
Aww, Im Really Sorry To Hear That. May God Be With You With Every Step You Take. &You May Copy It. But Please Be Sure To Put By:JenneeEsmeralda. &Again, Im Very Sorry.
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