Shoot Me to the Moon

[Stone]

Shoot Me to the Moon
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Shoot me to the moon
Send me to a far off place
Let me discover my own religion
And let me build a perfect race.
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Shoot me to the moon
Send me where I’m not held back
Let me experience complete reality
And let me retrace Gabriel's tracks.
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Shoot me to the moon
Send me from my humanly quod
Let me be a pioneer to heaven
And let me see a spineless God.
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Shoot me to the moon
Send me along a lonely road
Let me distinguish wrong and right
Then let me watch the world erode.

[Stone]

i'd be very satisfied if somebody commented on my poetry, i feel now that i need some feedback so that i can perhaps change some angles or build on stronger elements of my poetry, ta!

[lysander]

You are a great poet---you really hit home
:)

[Stone]

Thanks! I felt very distant from people when i thought up this one.

PS - i enjoyed The Mystical Doorway alot.