Be Set Free

[babyblu5501]

I normally do not share my poetry, because of this I do not know whether others believe it is good or not. To me it's stress relieving and wonderful, so please enjoy.


Lost without a seed of hope
Looking at life through a sniper scope
Hearts racing
Minds penetrating

Vision blurred
Life goes unearthed
Breathe and listen
Sweat beading and glistening

Losing focus, out of touch
Lost in a world with hatred and such
Grasping for something to hold
Living your life on the edge of untold

Sacred, human reaction
Bound to this lens with no satisfaction
Letting go, feeling free
Droping the scope so you can truely see

[Helen Cooper]

Your poem is deep and thought provoking. I enjoyed it and I think most of us wonder how others react to our poetry. I hope you post more.